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mj- 12-12-2004

hafiz saab zara ghor farmaiye ga ... arz kiya hai ..aahm aahm .. chupkey chupkey asar karta hai ishq cancer ki tarah badhta hai koi darta hai bhari mehfil mein koi tanhai mein hans parta hai yeh jannat hai yahi hai dozakh aur dekho to yahi duniya hai sab ki kismat mein fanaa hai jab tak aasmaano mein koi zinda hai wo khuda hai to zameen par aaye hashr ka din to yahan barpa hai saans rokey huay baitho 'Amjad' waqt dushman ki tarah chalta hai

mohsin- 12-13-2004

bohat khoob .. great one mj to poet kab say bana hai :) acha combination hai

Rehman- 12-13-2004

main ney kaha g zara tawajjah chahta hoon apni tanhai merey naam pe abad kerey koun ho ga jo mujhey uss ki terha yaad krey dil ajab shehr hai k jis pe bhi khula dur uss ka wo musafir isey her simt berbad krey apney qatil ki zahanat sey preshan hoon main rooz ik moot naye tarz ki ijaad krey slb-e binai ke ihkaam miley hain jo kabhi roshni choney ki khowahish koi shab-e zaad krey sooch rakhna bhi jurm main hai bemisaal ab to wohi masoom hai her baat pe jo sayyad krey jab laho bool parey iss ke gawahoon ke khilaf qazi-e shehr kuch iss baab main irshaad krey iss ki muthi main bohat rooz raha mera wajood merey sahir sey kaho ab mujhey azaad krey

mj- 12-13-2004

buss yaar mohsin ..... wo 'Sufi Tabassum ' ka ek sheir hai ... dil 'Tabassum' kisi ko do pehlay ... muft mein shayari nahi hoti ... jab se ishak hua hai hum shayar ho gaye hain ... aur hafiz saab ki taraf se abhi tak daad nahi mili ... :oops: hafiz jeee again ghor farmaiye ga . arz kiya hai .... aahm aahm .. hum ghazal mein tera charchaa nahi honay detay teri yaadon ko bhi russwa nahi honey detay kuch to hum khud bhi nahi chahtay shohrat apni aur kuch log bhi aisa nahi honay detay azmatein apnay charaagon ki bachanay k liye hum kisi ghar mein ujaala nahi honay detay mujh ko thaknay nahi deta yeh zaroorat ka pahaar meray bachchay mujhay boodha nahi honay detay

sweet girl- 12-15-2004

Mujh Say Perda Hai Tu Phir Khuwab Mein Attay Kion Ho Piyar Ki Shama DIl Mein Jalaty Kion Ho Alwida Kehnay Ko Aye Ho Tu Milna Kaisa Dil He Jab Mil Na Sakay Tu Phir Hath Milaty Kion Ho :)

Rehman- 12-15-2004

:shek sweatgal one from me :P chand meri khirki main aye chand kabhi to taroon ki iss bheer sey nikley aur meri khirki main aye bilkul tanha aur akela main us ko bahon main bher loon aik hi saansh main sab wo batein ker loon jo merey talo sey chimtin hain dil main simti rehti hain sab kuch aisey hi ho jaye,jab hai na chand meri khirki main aye tab hai na

mohsin- 12-15-2004
ehum ehum .......
Log ishq karte hain, Bare shor ke saath, Humne bhi kiya, Bare zor ke saath, Magar ab karenge, Thora gaur ke saath, Kyonki kal usko dekha, Kisi aur ke saath! :goli:

mj- 12-16-2004

nice mohsin ..... aur ab hamari taraf se .... arz kiya hai hamesha deir kar deta hoon main zaroori baat kehni ho koi vaada nibhana ho usey awaz deni ho usey wapis bulana ho... hamesha deir kar deta hoon main madad karni ho us ki yaar ki dhaaras bandhaani ho bohut deireena raston par kisi se milney jana ho... hamesha deir kar deta hoon main badaltay mausamo ki sair mein dil ko lagaana ho kisi ko yaad rakhna ho kisii ko bhool jaana ho... hamesha deir kar deta hoon main kisii ko maut se pehlay kisi ghum se bachaana ho haqeeqat aur thii kuch us ko ja ke ye bataana ho.... hamesha deir kar deta hoon main

Rehman- 12-17-2004

gahey gahey bas ab ye hi ho kya tum sey mil ker bohat khushi ho kya mil rahi ho barey tapaak k saath mujh ko yaksar bhula chuki ho kya yaad hain ab bhi apney khowab tumhain kuch hum b kahein :P mujh sey mill ker udaas bhi ho kya bas yon hi ik khyal aya soochti ho to soochto ho kya ab meri koi zindgi hi nahin ab bhi tum meri zindgi ho kya kya kaha ishq jadwani hai !! akhri baar mil rahi ho kya haan fiza yahan ki soi soi c hai to bohat teez roshni ho kya merey sab tanz be asar hi rahey tum bohat door ja chuki ho kya dil main ab sooz intzaar nahin shama ummeed bjh gai ho kya iss samundar pe tashna kaam hoon main baan tum ab bhi be rahi ho kya

mj- 12-17-2004

arz kiya hai .... kab se hain ek harf pe nazrein jamii huii vo parh raha hoon jo nahi likha kitaab mein some more ..... us ne rukh se hataa ke baalon ko raasta de diya ujaalon ko jaatay jaatay jo murr ke dekh liya aur uljhaa diya khayaalon ko ek halki si muskarahat se us ne hal kar diya sawaalon ko mar gaye hum to dekh lena "Mohsin" yaad aayenge husn waalon ko

Rehman- 12-23-2004

yaar waisey hum 3 hi hain idher koi aur participate hi nai ker raha .... mohsin sahab jagao inko b .. do aks numaayaan they paaniyon main saath saath ik ashk kya gira k mazer hi badal gaye ...

Farhan Hafeez Chaudhary- 12-23-2004

khUdA kArE tUjhE AIsI bEEmArI lAgE tU bUdhApE mEIn bhI kUnwArI lAgE dArjAn hO jAYEn tErE bAchE tU phIr bhI hUm kO pYArI lAgE!!! :dekha:

Rehman- 01-01-2005

kuch meri taraf sey bhi :) na wada hai koi tum sey,koi rishta nibhane ka na koi aur hi dil main,tahayya ya irada hai! kai din sey mager dil main ajab uljhan c rehti hai na tum iss dastan k sarsri kirdar ho koi na qissa itna sada hai ! taluq jo main samjha tha kahin uss sey ziada hai !!

mj- 01-03-2005

arz kiya hai ... daag duniya ne diye , zakhm zamaaney se milay hum ko yeh tohfay tumhein dost bananay se milay hum tarastay hi tarastay hi tarastay hi rahey wo falaanay se falaanay se falaanay se milay khud se mil jaatay to chahta ka bharam reh jaata kya miley aap jo logon k milaaney se miley kaisey maaney k unhein bhool gaya tu ay ' Kaif ' un k Khat aaj hamein tere sarhaaney se miley :goli:

mohsin- 01-03-2005
wa jee waa.. bohat achay
waaoooo kya kaaha hai .. bohat achay .. good peotry

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